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I'm confused. I didn't understand any of this. Pandora

Thanks guys. I wrote another, with a bit more meaning, so I'd appreciate more critiquing. Pandora

I liked both! Pandora

I read it aloud and it flowed in my head so beautifully! Awesome work! It makes my first poem (I posted today) seem so bad...lol....keep up the great work! Pandora

Hey everybody!! finally going to get it on!!! but this one's really short so i could use some help! Chapter Three-Dinner "How was your day dear?" Mia's father, Mr.Smith, asked ...

Stunning. It looks like you put a lot of thought into this. Keep up the great work! Pandora

I have no idea. Sorry! Pandora

Really creepy. But good nonetheless. Like Elizabeth?^^^ said, it leaves little to the imagination. It should be a bit more mysterious. Make us think about what happened. Love the first ...

That was really long, but great! I'd love to see more! Pandora

Oh wow! That was awesome! You should definatley write more poems. I would love to read more of your work. Dani

I really like this, it seems like you put a lot of feeling into it and it turned out very nice. Pandora

I reread my message earlier ^^^ and saw that in the explanation of the orphan thing, I said her father was in on it, but in the actual story, I ...

Well, I wrote that she only shuddered, because like I said before, she was chained. She could barely move, let alone back into a corner. Also, the word 'minute' does ...

From here you could see almost everyone, there was so many people! I wiped my red, tear stained eyes, took a deep, and said “Peter, to me was my boyfriend, ...

I like how they're all proper. It makes it seem like real life. How some kids will follow whatever their parents say. Pandora