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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Love You Forever

    well written, I like it especialy the last stanza wasn't much for the last line in the second stanza though. other then that everything else was really good :)

    Nov 17, 2008


By the sweat of your brow you will eat your food until you return to the ground, since from it you were taken; for dust you are and to dust you will return.
— Genesis 3:19