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Re: The Fox is Stuck Chapter 1: We Meet the Fox
This is an overly all O.K. intro but in my opinion it bounces around to much. Especially in the begging i had trouble knowing what the perspective was. Also, If ...
Apr 2, 2016 -
Re: Raindrops !
This is my first review so it might not be to good but it is what I feel. I liked how it is divided into small sentences and phrases with ...
Apr 2, 2016