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I read that book earlier this year and, though some parts of it were corny, it was pretty good overall. It expressed things in a realistic way and didn't make ...

I loved this series; I read the entire thing and am kind of sad its over. I have also started the Demonata series though that one isn't as good.

So far this is pretty good; good plot, good character development, good mystery and even good tantalizers.

Thanks for the critique Zen; also the description actually does play a role in the story, specifically the end.

Though there were spelling mistakes, such as "getle" it was a good idea.

Its coming out May 8th of this year.

This story is good because it grabs your attention and seems to be leading somewhere interesting; I hope you have more to come.

This book was awesome, I especially liked the end. :wink:

I would love to critique this and what not, but its already really good, so nice.

Wow, I want to give critique for this but I can't really find anything to critique so I'm just going to have to say, nice job and keep it up.

This part was pretty good too, although, I think that you should get rid of some of the "had"s they sort of take away from the overall flow of your ...

Thanks, it took me a while to do this one and those descriptions were kind of new for me.

Nice essay, but I think you should rearrange the structure of it a little bit. For example, in the opening paragraph try to summarize everything you're going to say in ...

Well, although I usually don't like this type of thing, this was pretty good. By the way, is this continued or is this the only one?

Olenus flies a little too close to the sun :wink: