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oh and the play format is just so i can focus on writing i'll make it seem more like a novel when i'm finished. hope you enjoy the rest.

thank for your review i will start on that. Hope you enjoy the rest when i post it. once again thank you.

my bad i read the review too fast i did spell it wrong thank you

thank you for you review i will start on those changes but with the first sentence [if he survived he surly would have taken us out]. It is how i ...

i like it good work