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Ahhhh! I wrote a long review with nitpicks and everything and then my Internet disconnected! Totally unfair...well anyway I LOVE this chapter and can't wait to read more. I will ...

This was really good. I am reading this kind of thing in school right now. You start off very well, you get people interested my only thing is that you ...

I laughed when you added the bit about Twilight, a good bit of humor. :lol: I like this chapter a lot. It is a bit short and I can't wait ...

Why on earth have you not continued this yet? I think it is very good and I want to know what happens! Your story line at times can be confusing ...

Wow! Okay, it took forever but I just finished reading all 6 chapters, and may I say, it was worth it! All right, first with the insane complements: I loved ...

Nice, I liked it. A little short for my taste though! :P Okay, on to the review...(sorry, I am in a nitpick mood) 8) Too bad he is kind of ...

Wow, that took forever, but I am glad that I did it. I have just completed all 13 chapters of your story. It was really good and I like it ...

Hello! Welcome! Just to tell you, as a rule we like it when you review at least two pieces before you post your own. That way we don't just have ...

Yay! That was so good! I loved it and I am so glad that they are together and he found out! :D I think that he should perhaps freak out ...

Yay! You remembered to PM me, thank you! This was really good, I like that we get more information on what is happening in the present. Her parents are a ...

Hm, I liked your writing style, the way you described things. Unfortunately I didn't like your story. I am really sorry, it just didn't capture me. Now, before you go ...

Good part two! I really enjoyed reading it, the way you described everything was great! Not that much to say really, I liked it all! Sorry that this isn't a ...

Why do you do this? Well in any case I loved it. I thought that it sounds interesting and I am a total sap for gooey love stories. You have ...

Yay, 12th chapter! This was a very good chapter, I didn't have a problem with your lack of romance. I thought the interactions between Carmen and Nora were plenty. :lol: ...

This was hands down, a fantastic story. I really enjoyed the change of pace, everyone always talks about how great love is (myself included) so it was nice to read ...