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thanks for the critique!! :3 I fixed the grammatical issues and I edited one part to: I also found a pup named Splotch, who was so afraid to speak and ...

I absolutely love this. All the descriptions are amazing, draw, and realistic, and I love the use of the five senses. (off-topic but this sort of reminds me of my ...

Oh wow, this is absolutely amazing. I usually don't read poetry, but this one hits so hard and when the topic is someone reappearing after so long after not caring. ...