oliviacray

I wtote this to show even though you think your not pretty or anything your beautiful no matter what.

Great job, I read this and it felt like the words spat in anger which made it even better.

The rhythm and mood was wonderfuly written! You are a very talented writer and I think many people here could agree :)

This poem was beautiful! Ever since word fit and I could just picture the settting and characters. Brovo!

Thank you, yeah I'm really wanting to reword this poem since it was a rough draft and other people recommend this web address so it was really a thrown together ...

I wrote this poem because I always here myself say I should go on a diet, I'm fat, I need to lose weight. I never do. I usually eat alot ...