olivia1987uk

Smoking in pubs? You having a laugh? They were the good old days! haha

Lol, the man is autistic...the words are basic for a reason! This is also why it doesn't "flow"!

Oh good! I hope you got it done in time! If there's anything else you need any help with, feel free to PM me...I have quite a bit of free ...

Back, sorry about that! This my favorite room in my grandmother’s house. Possibly my favorite room any where. I'd replace the full stop in between these two sentences with a ...

Good one! Kudos to you my dear! Must be a UK thing, lol! But anyway, just when I was getting bored of the monotony of reading teenage romance after teenage ...

No problem my dear....give me a shout if you want a helping hand!

Well mine certainly is a positive review...sorry if it didn't come across as though it was! :roll: I think the character of Bella is very defined and I am slightly ...

I have already reviewed it but I will do it again in more detail since you asked so nicely! Haha! Dear Mum, I’m leaving. I’m sorry, but I can’t stay ...

Can you do me a favour lucyy and post the edited one as soon as you can...I like to know how they turn out and I will be bugging you ...

If you don't I will! Lol, I have no qualms with stealing your idea if you don't put it to good enough use...its like a pair of shoes that will ...

Thinking about it though, you could use this as a literary tool rather than a "mistake" about the tense... It could theoretically be Katy's inability to come to terms with ...

Lol, there's only one mistake and it was only an apostrophe!!!!!!! Lol! You act like I've slated your work completely! Haha! You really should carry on with it though! Only ...

Thanks for your comments! I will be carrying on with this, hopefully with a little help from my friend....I'm going to write a section from Corinna's point of view as ...

This is why I love you! Lol! The things I wanted to sayve already been said as per usual! I need to speed up me thinks! But yeah, Andrew, you're ...

Not that I didn't love the first version (because, lets be honest, my other review kind of gave that away), but this is a lot better. I love your imagery. ...