olivia1987uk

It will be edited dear, was written in 10 mins inbetween uni work and I have a feeling it'll be a full novel so I don't need to cram it ...

eeeek lol

Oooooooooohhhhhh! Much better! I really liked this...the spelling errors and minor grammatical errors seemed to take away from the flow of the story and to be honest, were quite distracting. ...

Can it not just be a statement in a colloquial piece of writing? I know what you mean, and I do agree it isn't correct. But shouldn't writing have some ...

Hello again! Long time no see! Hehe, i kind of meant that there are a few typos throughout the piece and i think if you re read it you would ...

Hi, welcome to YWS, I haven't come across you before... Thanks for your comments... I was always told never to start sentences with conjunctives but it seems even the most ...

FINALLY! Cheers me dears....:P looooooove yooooooou! xxx

Surely you can be mysterious and not lack description though....otherwise it would be really boring!

Lol, I love it when I'm right! Yay! hehe xx

I didn't find it boring at all...far from it! I think it's because I knew it was a diary entry when I started reading it....therefore i wasn't expecting it to ...

The names really amuse me...I just keep saying "Quennel" to myself. It truly has a great sound...pointless message, sorry

I most definitely liked it! Probably didn't stress it enough. I really was captivated by the beginning, honestly! It drew me in hook, line and sinker and it is so ...

Hi! Can I Just say, he hasn't killed BECAUSE he has autism...he has killed AND he has autism...there's a difference!

Thanks for your entry...it's the first one I've received...obviously I can't post a review myself...

I'm afraid I have to ignore everything in your review...there isn't a word missing in the line you pointed out and the spelling errors you corrected are the English spelling ...