olivia1987uk

God, this quite good dear! I'm very impressed by the way! I didn't notice all the other stuff people had commented so I'm presuming you've edited it so it's all ...

DON'T LEAVE THIS HOW IT IS! It'll ruin all your hard work on the previous six chapters It needs depth and detail. Explain how showstoppingly beautiful Josie looks in her ...

Apart form a few typos and grammatial things already pointed it, this was very good, as per usual! Lol! I bet you get bored with me making the same comments ...

I don't agree with the whole info dump comment on the paragraph about classes...I want to know what Josie has grown into liking...after all we have watched her grow up! ...

I agree with the comments about this seeming lacked the depth and character definition that you had so successfully achieved in the first three hasn't put me off though and ...

This captures me more the more I read...and that says a lot...usually I would have lost interest by now...the things I would have said critique wise have already been said ...

I'm getting into this probably going to read and review the whole lot now. I know what I'm like... My only problem with this was that Josie seems a little ...

As you already have loads of reviews on this, obviously because it is so readable and likeable, so I will just make a breif comment on this particular chapter...I like ...

I like this poem....you can tell its very heartfelt and anything with obviously strong emotions draws me in straight away...especially when it is this well written... Cirantha's advice is absolutely ...

How good am I? Straight on it! I need a life! Haha Anyways...here goes Gossip - n a. somebody who habitually reveals fats concerning other people b. a chatty talk ...

Hey lhighton! I absolutely adore this genre of Austen...and my Wednesday night was so boring last night as Lost in Austen had finished...gutted! But anyway, I did like this and ...

I hope the reviews on this part of the story did not put you off carrying it on because that really would be a travesty! I was confused by them ...

Hey! I realise that it's almost a year since this thread was created BUT...I've only just found it and I am quite shocked nd little upset that this has not ...

Hey dreamintechnicolour! Short but sweet I think is a very good way to describe this! I hope to God you're carrying it on as it has made me want to ...

Hey...not sure whether this is particularly legal but I wish this I knew this site was around when I was doing my GCSE's....it's like a little godsend I suppose...but anyway! ...