okiegirl323

Thank you for the feedback and I'll be the first to admit grammar and spelling aren't my strongest skills. This story was posted on another site and it blocked together ...

I'm sorry about all the mistakes, I did have an editor but she stopped editing about two weeks ago and I haven't found a replacement. I'll take your advice into ...

I like it, but my pet peeve is when people leave I's as i. Other than that short and sweet, very enjoyable.