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Thanks for your comments and kind words. :] I think maybe I'll try and pry it away from the quote a bit, so it's more free-standing, and then maybe I'll ...

Thank you guys! :) I'll definitely think about the punctuation and some of the words.

Thank you, everybody, for you kind words!

Aw, I like this very much! It's got a very nice rhythm to it, despite the shortness. I like the rhyming - it doesn't seemed forced at all, and it ...