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nice story! If you have more then I'll definetly read! A few things I noticed though: you did not describe the princess, I really would like to know what she ...

NICE. I really really like it!! okay, time for reviews! I personally think she should be in a little more pain when the guys find her, depending on how much ...

nice story! Are the couple always fighting, though? It was really good! Nice descriptions! I never really thought I'd enjoy reading about this kind of stories this much!! Nice way ...

i guess I'm sort of shocked... don't compare it with Twilight. This is just different. Why didn't you put the R thing on the title? I guess this is your ...

few spelling mistakes but who in the world cares when you're working with talent such as yourself! I love this story!!! I love the way you write, I love the ...

OMG. I love it, love it, love it!!! This is amazing! *jaw falling open* it made me forget where I was, your descriptions are so good! It's so natural!! Keep ...

Nice story! I really liked it!! If you write more than I'll read! Only.... are you trying to make the main character to be so typical? I mean, she sounds ...

nice story!! cool version of cinderella! only, cinderela had a stepmother which hated her. you forgot about her shoe, she was supposed to loose a shoe right? and besides... I ...

wow. that was so good! i love the way you write and describe! halfway through the story though I thought Tar was a guy. ^^ I was a bit dissapointed ...

it's awesome! I loved it! it's just... take the story to a place twilight hadn't okay? twilight is twilight. it is what it is. But this could be something new, ...