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Thank you so much for your review!! I'm really glad the stream-of-consciousness style worked for you, especially since that was the main thing I was experimenting with when writing this. ...

Thank you! I really appreciate that, especially the comment about my emotional writing. I'll definitely keep practicing and working on the discipline you mentioned. And thank you again for taking ...

Thank you so much for the review, I will keep your tips in mind As for your fourth point, the thought was meant to be uncompleted to show her disorientation. ...

Hey, First of all thank you for your review, you are right that without guidance potential is useless, that's why I posted it here. The main reason for the bad ...