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Re: Prologue: Book One
Hello, I really enjoyed this story, it had a great flow and everything was explained carefully and no gaps were missed. Really loved it :) Positives- I love the characters, ...
Oct 28, 2016 -
Re: To Be a Dragonry Pt 1
Hello, I really enjoyed this piece, I adore dragons and this has a fresh concept that I'd really like to read more of. Positives- You stole my heart when you ...
Oct 27, 2016 -
Re: The Guardians
Hello! Okay, I really like this piece, you have achieved a lot of emotion in this and accurately represented it through a situation not many have experience. It helps to ...
Oct 13, 2016 -
Re: The Two Brothers (part 1)
Hello! To start off I really like your piece of work. Fantasy is my favourite genre of books, and I especially like them when it's set in a new world ...
Oct 13, 2016
