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occymay

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Prologue: Book One

    Hello, I really enjoyed this story, it had a great flow and everything was explained carefully and no gaps were missed. Really loved it :) Positives- I love the characters, ...

    Oct 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: To Be a Dragonry Pt 1

    Hello, I really enjoyed this piece, I adore dragons and this has a fresh concept that I'd really like to read more of. Positives- You stole my heart when you ...

    Oct 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Guardians

    Hello! Okay, I really like this piece, you have achieved a lot of emotion in this and accurately represented it through a situation not many have experience. It helps to ...

    Oct 13, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Two Brothers (part 1)

    Hello! To start off I really like your piece of work. Fantasy is my favourite genre of books, and I especially like them when it's set in a new world ...

    Oct 13, 2016


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