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Re: Land of The Dying Sun 2: Under The Starry Sky
Thank you for the high praise! I'm glad that you enjoyed my work!
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Land of The Dying Sun 2: Under The Starry Sky
Thank you for the review! I'll try to work on keeping the pace steady in the future. I want the story to be on the slower side since I think ...
Jun 4, 2016 -
Re: Children of The Pipes Chapter 5: On Her Own
Thank you for the feedback!
May 2, 2016 -
Re: Children of The Pipes Chapter 5: On Her Own
Totally fine dude. Don't worry about it. I actually wanted to ask your opinion on some other feedback I've been given. Would you agree that my descriptions are too long ...
Apr 11, 2016 -
Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 2: The City of Scott
I was actually going for a cold, third person tone, since I thought it matched the world that the book is set in. However, I do think that the lack ...
Feb 27, 2016 -
Re: Children of The Pipes Chapter 4 : A Bastard
Thank you for this set of reviews that you did. It's clear that you put a lot of effort into reading and analyzing my writing. All of your points have ...
Feb 25, 2016 -
Re: Riptides and Ghosts Chapter 1: Observation
Thank you for the feedback! It seems however, that you misread. The character resides in a lifeguard tower, not a lighthouse. I can see how you confused the two but ...
Feb 20, 2016 -
Re: Riptides and Ghosts Chapter 1: Observation
I'd definitely agree with you that this chapter is rushed. Looking back, I wish that I had not released this in the state that it is in. I'm definitely going ...
Feb 20, 2016 -
Re: I Wander Alone
This was actually supposed to be a work of fiction, but it's interesting that you interpreted it as nonfiction. I am also not a pro at poetry (a pro-et if ...
Jan 22, 2016 -
Re: I Wander Alone
thank you!
Jan 22, 2016 -
Re: I Wander Alone
thank you!
Jan 22, 2016 -
Re: I Wander Alone
I am very annoyed that the text editor built into the site refuses to stop adding in double-spacing. I have no idea how to fix this and any help would ...
Jan 19, 2016 -
Re: Children of The Pipes Chapter 4 : A Bastard
Thank you again for your very detailed criticism, it never stops being helpful! I don't think I'll ever stop being shocked that someone cares enough about my little hobby enough ...
Dec 24, 2015 -
Re: Children of The Pipes Chapter 4 : A Bastard
Thank you!
Dec 24, 2015 -
Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 3: A Girl
Holy crap. Thank you so much for the assloads of praise you've hefted onto me. The fact that you're enjoying it so much is extremely gratifying after I've put so ...
Dec 19, 2015
