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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Land of The Dying Sun 2: Under The Starry Sky

    Thank you for the high praise! I'm glad that you enjoyed my work!

    Jun 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Dramatic Re: Land of The Dying Sun 2: Under The Starry Sky

    Thank you for the review! I'll try to work on keeping the pace steady in the future. I want the story to be on the slower side since I think ...

    Jun 4, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Children of The Pipes Chapter 5: On Her Own

    Thank you for the feedback!

    May 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Children of The Pipes Chapter 5: On Her Own

    Totally fine dude. Don't worry about it. I actually wanted to ask your opinion on some other feedback I've been given. Would you agree that my descriptions are too long ...

    Apr 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 2: The City of Scott

    I was actually going for a cold, third person tone, since I thought it matched the world that the book is set in. However, I do think that the lack ...

    Feb 27, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Children of The Pipes Chapter 4 : A Bastard

    Thank you for this set of reviews that you did. It's clear that you put a lot of effort into reading and analyzing my writing. All of your points have ...

    Feb 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Riptides and Ghosts Chapter 1: Observation

    Thank you for the feedback! It seems however, that you misread. The character resides in a lifeguard tower, not a lighthouse. I can see how you confused the two but ...

    Feb 20, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Riptides and Ghosts Chapter 1: Observation

    I'd definitely agree with you that this chapter is rushed. Looking back, I wish that I had not released this in the state that it is in. I'm definitely going ...

    Feb 20, 2016
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, General Re: I Wander Alone

    This was actually supposed to be a work of fiction, but it's interesting that you interpreted it as nonfiction. I am also not a pro at poetry (a pro-et if ...

    Jan 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, General Re: I Wander Alone

    thank you!

    Jan 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, General Re: I Wander Alone

    thank you!

    Jan 22, 2016
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, General Re: I Wander Alone

    I am very annoyed that the text editor built into the site refuses to stop adding in double-spacing. I have no idea how to fix this and any help would ...

    Jan 19, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Children of The Pipes Chapter 4 : A Bastard

    Thank you again for your very detailed criticism, it never stops being helpful! I don't think I'll ever stop being shocked that someone cares enough about my little hobby enough ...

    Dec 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Children of The Pipes Chapter 4 : A Bastard

    Thank you!

    Dec 24, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Children of the Pipes Chapter 3: A Girl

    Holy crap. Thank you so much for the assloads of praise you've hefted onto me. The fact that you're enjoying it so much is extremely gratifying after I've put so ...

    Dec 19, 2015


have u ever noticed how ugly rosy-lipped batfish r? and not like in the “aw ur so ugly ur cute” way that like opossums r — no they’re just hideously ugly beasts that should never have existed and r the epitome of evolution fails. the stupidity, blank look, head emptiness. they’re horrible n everyone who likes them r horrible too. they truly have the worst fan-base >:[
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