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Re: The Throne of Cymus Ch 1
I think I might rewrite a few of the later chapters.
Fri Jan 13, 2012 11:13 am -
Re: Secrets...
What I mean is with those lines is a moment of pain so great that you don't know what's real or not.
Mon Jan 02, 2012 9:28 pm -
Re: My Immortal
I'll make the changes, I'm horrible when it comes to tense.
Sat Sep 03, 2011 10:23 am -
Re: Missing You
Definite improvement.
Fri Aug 19, 2011 5:35 am -
Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever
Something funny and light. Not the best piece of work as it isn't as well structured as a normal story. It is also a bit short, but I guess that's ...
Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:53 pm -
Re: The Physics of Me
By the way, which uni are you hoping to be accepted into?
Sun Aug 14, 2011 5:15 am -
Re: The Path of Destruction
Thanks for the feedback so far. I don't write poetry that often.
Mon Aug 01, 2011 11:33 am -
Re: Harry Potter and the Chamber of Secrets (Twitterized)
Short and funny. It sums up Chamber Of Secrets in less than 10 mins. But It would of been better with more detail.
Mon Aug 01, 2011 5:41 am -
Re: Words
A wonderful poem that brings forth the fact that love is an emotion that words can't convey. Short and simple but with a deeper meaning.
Sun Jul 31, 2011 9:28 am -
Re: Safe (Part 1)
Reality is a bitch. Great story, keep writing.
Sun Jul 31, 2011 8:53 am -
Re: Aftermath Chapter 1
Its a work in progress. The second paragraph is a dream. It will make more sense in a later chapter.
Tue Jun 28, 2011 6:13 am