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Re: Paralleled - [chapter one]
*whistles* I have to say, I couldn't stop reading. While I was reading, it was real. The characters, names, settings - all of it was tangible and had it's own ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: It Is Incredible
Hey defyinggravity :) I'd like to start off by saying that this poem does have a lot of truth in it - It affects me because I'm one of those ...
Jan 4, 2014 -
Re: from polluted hearts and skyscrapers
Hallo Sophiewrites!! To start off, what a profound and effective piece! Your word choice is awesome - I can imagine this as a song, too! :D Just one thing: "by ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: Salvation (An edited version will be up soon)
Hi cmueser! Firstly I'd just like to say that this is a really beautiful, heart-warming story :) I think it's quite powerful because if the love it conveys. I have ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: Conversations between myself and God
This is a really intriguing piece! Firstly, I really love the format you've used - it's really clever, and many young readers nowadays would be able to relate to it ...
Jan 2, 2014 -
Re: Come Wander with Me
I might just start by saying, I really like your poem! You've done really well to convey a feeling of hopelessness that echoes throughout the whole thing, and you've created ...
Jan 1, 2014
