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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Paralleled - [chapter one]

    *whistles* I have to say, I couldn't stop reading. While I was reading, it was real. The characters, names, settings - all of it was tangible and had it's own ...

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: It Is Incredible

    Hey defyinggravity :) I'd like to start off by saying that this poem does have a lot of truth in it - It affects me because I'm one of those ...

    Jan 4, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: from polluted hearts and skyscrapers

    Hallo Sophiewrites!! To start off, what a profound and effective piece! Your word choice is awesome - I can imagine this as a song, too! :D Just one thing: "by ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: Salvation (An edited version will be up soon)

    Hi cmueser! Firstly I'd just like to say that this is a really beautiful, heart-warming story :) I think it's quite powerful because if the love it conveys. I have ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Other » Literature, Narrative Re: Conversations between myself and God

    This is a really intriguing piece! Firstly, I really love the format you've used - it's really clever, and many young readers nowadays would be able to relate to it ...

    Jan 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Come Wander with Me

    I might just start by saying, I really like your poem! You've done really well to convey a feeling of hopelessness that echoes throughout the whole thing, and you've created ...

    Jan 1, 2014


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