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  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: A Gruesome Bildungsroman

    Thank you for the review! I mentioned this a lot with whatchamacallit's review, but yes, I realize now that the wildly differing stanzas and lack of structure really detracted from ...

    Apr 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: A Gruesome Bildungsroman

    Thank you for your review! I agree with your thoughts on the organization. At first, I didn't really notice anything wrong with how I structured the stanzas, but after rereading ...

    Apr 5, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Meadow Tale

    In an alternate universe, I wrote a poem about a group of children who lure innocent bees to their marigold garden and use them to make various magical potions. In ...

    Apr 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Meadow Tale

    Thank you so much for your insight! Like I said with bpmzcpl, I rarely get critique on my creative writing, so when I saw another review, my heart exploded (in ...

    Apr 4, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Meadow Tale

    Thank you so much for leaving a review! I%u2019ve never been in a community where reviews and critique were emphasized as much as they are here, so I%u2019m really grateful ...

    Apr 4, 2020


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