nickelodeon

Very entertaining! 'The hag asked the mirror Who truly owned beauty. But the mirror responded, “Snow white – What a cutie.”'

Very entertaining! 'The hag asked the mirror Who truly owned beauty. But the mirror responded, “Snow white – What a cutie.”'

Thanks for the critiques! Actually, the names are correct in the last sentence. Belle is being babysat and Hilary is the babysitter. (Both are frightened by the storm and not ...

Thanks for the critiques. Actually, i have never been to Spain and the Spanish program at my school is a joke. So this is all very encouraging actually. thanks! =)

Oooo! I forgot to mention! I'm pretty sure Lucile is usually spelled Lucille with 2 L's. Obviously it doesn't matter, but i thought i'd enlighten you if you didn't already ...

Thanks for the suggestions. If you read the first part (It's titled the same thing) then it makes more sense. She's writing an article for the school paper.

Your conversation isn't very realistic. I get the impression that these girls are supposed to be self-absorbed and full of themselves, but i can't imagine anyone talking like that all ...

Give me feedback please! I don't so much care about grammer (although i'd like to hear that too...) But i'd really like to know if you liked it or how ...

That was really good. It's a really creative idea, and i like how you quoted the bible. Sometimes i saw how the quote hinted at what was coming next, but ...

It was different. I did that about it. It wasn't so deep and confusing.