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Re: Stepping Into Static - chapter 3
Thanks guys! And oh yeah, the perfection thing is 'under construction' because I changed him and forgot the follow up sentences... it was late! But ahk now I have so ...
Wed Dec 31, 2008 4:20 am -
Re: Stepping Into Static [Edited]
Aw Ash.. it's were , with us being all writers and such... Aw thanks! This ^ is all brilliant! When I do more crtis I'll donate more... I'm falling behind ...
Wed Dec 31, 2008 4:16 am -
Re: Stepping Into Static [Edited]
You bring up good points, ChernobyllyInclined, but this is under constant work on about 3 different forums I'm on... So the end result is going to be major different. This ...
Sun Dec 28, 2008 10:40 am -
Re: Cruel Night Fate - Prologue
Thanks Angel! I was going to go more on the helpless lover, angry wife, etc, but then, knowing me, I'd make it not the PG rating it had to be. ...
Sat Dec 27, 2008 4:58 am -
Re: Stepping Into Static [Edited]
^^ You all have 100 points more now!
Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:25 pm -
Re: Learning Love-Chapter One
Okay i am just going to be a total twit here and edit my own writing HA. Stones, with their cracked surfaces from the freezing temperatures, were aligned in a ...
Wed Dec 24, 2008 3:43 am -
Re: Well this shouldn't be! Prologue
In progress, i felt like giving you my opinion on it! Haha. But it is so late here, must sleep! Oh and good tactic with the cliches, I reckon it ...
Tue Dec 23, 2008 4:38 pm -
Re: Learning Love-Chapter One
Oh yes, is there more? Ha where's the romance? I cannot wait for the next bit, please pm me when the next bit is up, or i'll keep an eye ...
Tue Dec 23, 2008 11:42 am -
Re: Unseen Love
WOW that is long. Um... how about i do half now and half later? Oh my haha. I'll do it though, i love fantasy.
Thu Dec 18, 2008 11:50 am -
Re: Once A Dream, Always A Nightmare
Oh my Clo THANKYOU! That was great! Oh and thanks too Macs! Yess i do like that sentence too... and i will definitely fix up the things you all picked ...
Tue Dec 16, 2008 12:00 pm -
Re: Prologue: Harlem's Run
Okay reviewing now but telling people you haven't edited turns people off... and you should've edited before posting, though so far i can't find anything major. Give me until tomorrow
Tue Dec 16, 2008 8:56 am -
Re: Stepping Into Static [Edited]
Ah thankyou (lol 1.07am! Had to stay awake long enough to get this haha you're such a good reviewer!) My hero ashleylee. I have this submitted in another forum as ...
Mon Dec 15, 2008 4:08 pm -
Re: Stepping Into Static [Edited]
Okay i am sorry the vampism doesn't actually come out till next chapter gah. But i am physically unable to tell a short story which translates into I cannot make ...
Mon Dec 15, 2008 2:38 pm -
Re: Music In Me - Chapter 1
bahaha it's actually really good. I think so. But uh - you might also want to add more onto the introducing of the music 'end part' and all that interaction. ...
Mon Nov 24, 2008 3:28 pm -
Re: Scars That Never Heal
wow thanks guys! i finally got through ALL the versions. You guys rock :) And yeah Bryn was cliche, my bad! I had to have a hot blonde guy in ...
Sat Nov 22, 2008 9:47 am