nicchaos

Wow. That was deep. I was almost crying at the end. the vocabulary is so powerful and meaningful. your going to touch a lot of people with something like this.

I like the unorthodox use of adjectives. That is a fantastic way to get colorful words across. Also it was cool at the end to hear how they came together ...

Very powerful image created here, as well as some powerful emotions. Not to mention a lot of people can relate to this story. Overall, well done.

Alright alright. I give. The I's are capitalized. I admit, it does look better that way. To reader 22, no i don't thing its completely obvious. I am sad to ...

Yay! I love people telling me something is wrong. People really do care. :) To ruberduck, thanks for pointing that out. I will change it right away. And because you ...

I wrote this when I was trying to define myself. Some parts are cryptic and may only make sense to me, I"m good with that. The part at the end ...

I don't know, capitalizing the I's is technically incorrect, but i did not want to draw attenchen to the fact that I repeated "I" so many times. And I was ...

Ha Ha. :) She texted me right when i got home and asked about that. Regarding the poem, it was just something that was in my head that i wiped ...