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Heya Lovly_audrey! Glad this part came at last! Critiqually, there isn't much to correct. I guess, only the punctuations are needed to be put into account. So, here they are.... ...

Heya Lovly_Audrey! So this is the second chapter I've been waiting. Yeah, I'm glad to say that you did, again, a very great job... Very well done! Perhaps, you could ...

Heya! Welcome to YWS! :lol: You really got a nice talent in writing...honestly, I didn't find any errors on your work, whether grammatically, word structures and orders or choice of ...

Heya! I loved your piece - more on the fact that it tackled DEATH. And DEATH was also my subject as I wrote my hopefully-to-be-a-novel story entitled Phantasm. First thing ...

First, welcome to YWS! I certainly loved your work. It was quite new to me - very unique from any other Romantic fictions. The idea - the imagery and everything ...

Heya! I really enjoyed reading your work, though it's a little bit short and I was left with unanswered inquisitions - as if mysteries :lol: . I hope you'll work ...

Good Day! I definitely liked what you have written. I just wanted to critique a little and give some pointers... My hips started to sway with the beat. Don't have ...

I can clearly picture out your work- the scenes and occurrences. What I have to critique is the manner your poem flows. Though some parts did sound a poem, others ...

I salute the way you write- comprehensible and masterminded. Yet, it would be better appreciated if a little rhythmic pattern and meter was observed. And since you started placing a ...