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Re: Found and Lost
I really really love this :D it has a nice flow and rythm, the repetition is used fantastically without being TOO repetetive :) "But we never did grow old. Or ...
Dec 3, 2013 -
Re: Bon Voyage
I loved it :D I'm a major yaoi fangirl XD but the story was great, fun to read :) you're very talented. Keep it up :3 I can't wait for ...
Nov 14, 2013 -
Re: I'm not depressed.
This is great :) I can relate to this a lot, and I love the rhyming. I can hardly get a poem as long as this to rhyme and fit ...
Jul 22, 2013 -
Re: A poem from my heart
I love this. There were a few parts that didnt flow too well, but the depth and emotion in this is amazing. Keep on writing, you have a great talent ...
May 21, 2013 -
Re: FEAR part 1/2 ( completely revised and updated)
I really like this and cant wait for the next one. I noticed, like others, that there are errors an grammar etc, but I quite liked the storyline and the ...
May 21, 2013 -
Re: The Send Off
I really liked this. i see no real faults at all. please keep it up!
May 28, 2012