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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Heart of Stone<3

    To me, there are two parts of a short story. One is the part where things flow together, and the puzzle pieces fit together, and then there is the part ...

    Jul 30, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Forbidden Love; Chapter 1.

    ummmmmmmmmmm.......your probably gonna wanna slap me after this post, but that was a lil.....how do i say it?.....super confusing. it should be longer, it should be way more detail, etcetera ...

    Aug 11, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Hail Mary

    you have the most talent in a writer i have seen all my life. ive read over 75 books just this school year and about 1 or 2 matched up ...

    Aug 7, 2009


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