nataliejane

Hi , I really enjoyed reading this short story and the imagery was amazing. However I thought the imagery distracted from the true meaning of the story and confused me ...

I really liked the plot of your piece and thought the last few sentences were amazing.The description of the tramp was really good and I got a clear picture of ...

Hi, I really enjoyed this first chapter especially the introduction. The plot was interesting and made me want to read on but it would be even better if you described ...