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Thanks very much for your review! I see what you mean about Agisteri's gender being ambiguous at the beginning (a few people have now pointed this out to me) so ...

My apology about the quotations! I definitely still find dialogue a bit tricky, so thank you for the edits - I'll be going over the piece shortly with a fine ...

Thank you very much! This is the sort of review I love. The feedback is very constructive, so thank you for sharing - I have a lot of editing to ...

Just a heads up, I have published this story in the Books/Novels section and have written more if you're interested. It's under "Brother Moon, Sister Sun - Chapter 1". :)

Thanks for those tips. I have edited my story now with the changes you suggested. Just a heads up, I have published this story in the Books/Novels section and have ...

Thank you for your review grandpaslippers (awesome username btw)! I re-read the start, and I can see what you mean, it is a lot of information to take in straight ...

Hi Keepwriting (very fitting username!), Thank you for your review, and suggestion. I think you're right, the grammar is incorrect with the quotations that have run on sentences, I will ...

Thank you very much :)