mystogan

Nice start or first half should I say. I think it finally rings home the concepts surrounding the story. There is an evil organisation with an evil ugly woman kidnapping ...

Your description of the new town was really good. I am poor on describing settings so its nice to see you do it really well. I also like the part ...

Great chapter. At one point my stomach literally was in a knot. Something about that part with his hands and when he slowly woke up. There was just so much ...

Great chapter although it feels like a filler from animes because there was a huge chunk there which I have already read. Apart from that disappointment I liked how things ...

Great chapter and a nice change from the devil girls's point of view. It provided a different perspective which was lacking before. I thought I didn't mind but it really ...

Wow this was good. I like how I have been shown a scene that is going to happen rather than one that has already happened as is the custom with ...

This is a very touching poem which I can relate to in a way. But unfortunately my situation is not quite so fortunate. So this all makes me very passionate ...

I really like this. At first I thought it was about lords and kings but then I realised it was about fire. At least I hope it is but even ...

Damn, great chapter. And no you did not over do it with the information. I mean it was a great snipit. I always thought I understood how Dixon felt and ...

I have had a major doubt that has risen which I won't speak about now. Not openly anyway but if it does come to pass, expect a long paragraph of ...

ahh how sweet of Ricky and yuck, Dixon and Cheryl are so going that way, if it was Meryl I would not say that but Cheryl instead. Also I think ...

Ah ha, I thought there were suspicious people and frankly Cheryl is all over it. I would even go as far as suspecting Jonathon. You said on a review for ...

So finally it seems like some details are beginning to emerge. As for their romance, I am no longer interested in it or a supporter of it. It seems so ...

This clears up my suspicions that he did have a crap life. I mean his own account of his family shows why he was so quick to accept her and ...

Ahh, what an interesting turn of events. So apparently she is not crazy but simply a damsel in distress or should say one who refuses to be in distress but ...