mysterywriter

this was actually one of my favorite stories on the board. will you be posting the novel version here?

thanks for the grammar crits. i admitted when i first posted this story that grammar was not my forte. that's what they make editors for i suppose. :lol: also, i ...

this was a great story. i enjoyed it and i look forward to part 2. 8)

hey thanks for the crits. 8) when i said graphee was short for his age i meant compared to other boys, not sefier boys. i suppose i should elaborate on ...

kudos to you for being so open minded. we need more people like this in the world. 8)

thanks kay kay. i agree with a lot of what griffin keeper said as well. it's better to know your mistakes in the beginning, i think so anyway. i do ...

griffin writer: thank you for all of your suggestions. this was only the prologue though the numbers you see at the bottom of some of the paragraphs are page numbers ...

arv - i was worried about the beginning sounding too, oh what's the word, cliche'? so i will most definitely spruce that part up a bit. i am always open ...

To you.... cool. then i would be happy to give you my opinion and any suggestions i may have. i really am enjoying what i've read so far. great plot. ...

Hey I should be posting my next chapter soon...will ya crit it for me? were you addressing that to me or mattie? if you were addressing it to me then ...

bravo! 8) what a perfect image of what it's like to get your heart broken.

This a really good prologue in my opinion. It describes the plot very well. I just have to learn how to pronounce the names. Anyway, well done! ~Lollipop~ :D thanks! ...

It takes place in the 18th Century oops my bad. after i posted that and thought about it i realized since the character was to have an "arranged marriage" that ...