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Re: Simple Storm
I really like short poems. I'd have to say that length is definitely this particular poem's strength. Through its length, the buildup and the epiphany emulates the descriptions you used ...
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Re: Untitled
This is among the better poems that I've read so far. I'd like to start out by first saying that I disagree with the previous posters. I don't think you ...
May 18, 2009 -
Re: Into the Citrus Trees
Although simple and direct is good, the risk of running a poem that says exactly what it means is that it doesn't feel engaging enough when it is read. I ...
May 18, 2009
