myfreindsavamp

I have to agree with Crystal Soarceress. It does sound like a great peom but it needs to be grown out in a persay knd of way.

That was so sad. *Back to the subject* I would have explained things more and you could have streached it out more. Just saying.

Thank you.Thank you. *bows*^-^

Ya I'm pretty sure I've put this thing through the spell check 50 times. ^-^Thank you ch 2 will be coming onto the site tonight if I canget enuff points. ...

Yes I have to say that the title is perfect. How think is your skin really? Sould be: How thick is you skin really? Other than that I didn't find ...

It sounds like you might have gotten your heart broken and your waiting for another special person to come along. I doubt I'm right.*

She was shaken away the next morning by one of her [s]good[/s] friends, Jess. *fixed* I wouldn't say that Jess is a good freind....

Just edited again.^-^

She was jerked awak by her freind.

Is that better? I wasn't quite sure what you ment.

You also could've posted it as a draft. It doesn't have much to say about it SIC.

thank you. I just fixed them.^_^

Thanks I actually got the time to spell check it finally at school^_^

Ok now if I was writing this Id have another perspective show whats really happening because iM LOST!

(sorry this is so short.Had to say it in advance...) It was quite confusing but very sad at the asme time with love dripping from hte very words.