mybrokenreality

Hmmm...this was...interesting. It kind of goes hand in hand with the saying 'Less is more.' Lines may have been short but they delivered what you wanted to say. Although, maybe ...

Hmm...I liked it. The was a lot of imagery that kept me wanting to read on. Now, I just have a few tips for you. Grammar. Your puncuation is mostly ...

Hmmm...this was nice. I liked the opening and everything that you've written so far. I just have a few comments. Firstly, as soon as you finish a piece, and directly ...

I absolutely loved this poem. The personification of the wind and the imagery as a whole is captivating. It really makes you think about how being in the dark feels. ...

This was pretty good and overall I really liked it =) Ohh, these lines were my favorite: For there is no perfect line or time Just here and now Now, ...