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Re: Toxic Tongues
Hey, Tucker! I'm liking the fact that more and more writers are shedding light onto this topic. It's definitely important for people to understand the story on the other side ...
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Re: Confession
Hey, Shinda! I do very much like this poem. The rhyme patterning and the whole conceptual idea of this as being a 'confession' really complement each other. The way the ...
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Re: The Long Road
Mikko! This is a fine example of how profound a writer can become when she writes something that inspires herself completely. :) I'm glad you've realized that and that you've ...
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Re: Shatter me, Break me
Hey, Aliyah! This is a strongly worded poem with a context that I'm sure many are familiar with. I feel that this poem can bring about it's true potential. Whether ...
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Re: Adoption
Hey, Deanie! This is clearly one of my favourite poems by you. You've employed so much into this that it makes this such an interesting read. I know you've already ...
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Re: Your Dreams Kept me Awake
Hey, Kat! There's not much I can lay out for you here since the others have already given you all you need to improve. And this isn't a review :) ...
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Re: Eternity
Hey, Anwesha! I really like the simplicity and the structure of this poem. It's sweet in it's message and sheds light on the magical personality that love and affection show. ...
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Re: Beautiful Baby
Hey, OverEasy! I like the name of this poem and just thought I'd take a look at it. And I'm glad I did :) This is sweet and has so ...
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Re: Kissing Alfredo
Hey, Audy! Firstly, this is not a review. I'm too inexperienced in writing short stories to give out any sort of correctional value for this piece. But all I can ...
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Re: Poems on Faith
Hey, Misstoria! The first peom 'Faith' is quite a great way of showing your feelings on the subject. Although, I feel that faith cannot lie in between truth and lies ...
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Re: She gives
Hermy!! Wow, I love this poem a lot! The somewhat dark yet confusing subject matter is quite intriguing and begs to be asked the question - 'What in the world ...
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Re: Happiness
Hey, Weaver! I'm really liking this piece a lot. It's quite frank and casual. The opening and ending are sweet and bring about the entire context of the poem really ...
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Re: Deleted 7
Hey Lumi! I can definitely imagine seeing this as a series. The thing I found most appealing in this piece was the imagery. It wasn't that in-depth and gave the ...
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Re: Winter Air
Hey, Tucker!! I loved the last winter poem a lot and I love this one even more. And yes, it's got a lot of good quality in terms of imagery ...
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Re: My Son is Gay
Hey, Bear! There's not much I'll be able to add to the mountain of praise that you've already received for this piece. But what makes this so unique is that ...
Dec 7, 2011
