munchkin

Hello Angel! Oh my goodness!!!! THIS IS AMAZING! (sorry for the caps, everyone) The idea... The length.. Everything is awesome. I couldn't find anything, at all, to critique! But, I ...

CrazyGirl, hey there! Okay, so your story does need some work. But most of it is just little things (like, long sentences and in places wording is a bit strange, ...

HI! ( I'm new at this, so I'm not very good ) I liked this, but, I think you should have a little more of a background story? I think ...

Wow, this is awesome! I liked you're word choices a lot, and the plot was really cool, but, you could kinda tell what was about to happen at times. It ...