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Well first ill tell you the thing I liked or you did good on with the story, well first you did very good with your dialogue. And you also had ...
Apr 6, 2014 -
Re: The Stars in Her Eyes - Chapter 1 Part 2
you have many details and I love that. you have very little spelling errors, and the plot flows perfectly. And it give you that I want more vibe in it ...
Apr 5, 2014