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Re: A Storm of Us
Hi AutoPilot! Wow, what a great metaphorical poem! I think you did a GREAT job of keeping the metaphor fluid and relative to the big picture of the work; it ...
Jan 17, 2018 -
Re: The Kids Aren't Alright
Stormcloud, I think this is a beautiful piece of writing. You did a phenomenal job of expressing your emotions - not just by telling the readers about them, but by ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: The Skeleton (Corsets and Regrets)
Hi ellasnotebook! I really enjoyed reading your poem; it felt very achey to me, which I think is one of the emotions you were trying to extol from your audience ...
Jan 12, 2018