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Thank you again for this wonderful review!! And I agree with your points. As for how the guards found Ren, it does tie in with the plot, though in a ...

Thank you so much again for this wonderful review!! It means so much, and you have a great way of noticing things I hadn't even considered. Thank you, it is ...

Thank you so much again for a wonderful review!! It makes me so happy whenever you describe exactly what I mean to convey with my characters.

Thank you so much!! I will definitely look into making this chapter more personal.

I love these suggestions!! And thank you so much for your wonderful review.

This was so helpful!! I, typically, rely upon my own mind to organize and remember my notes, only to become enraged when I awake in the morning with every file ...

Wow, thank you so much for this wonderful review!! I agree with everything you said and I will definitely try to add more detail where it%u2019s needed and take it ...

Thank you so much!! And I agree with your comment about the repeated "Silence. Then..." so I will be fixing that.

Thank you for your review!

Wow, thank you! I will most definitely not neglect my other book. In all honesty, this is just a side project I've had in the making for a while, so ...

Ahh thank you for this review! It means so much! I love all your suggestions and agree. I will work on bettering the variation and flow in my sentence structure. ...

Thank you for these suggestions! I agree with all of them. And thank you for taking the time to review! It means a lot.

Ahhh, that makes a lot of sense. You do do a wonderful job of writing within the character's voice so their observations are all natural to themselves. But, yeah, I ...

Sounds good!! I definitely don%u2019t want to be redundant, especially if you are still in the process of revising.

Oh that thing about the masks makes a lot of sense!! And sounds good. I did see that Eric is Rachel%u2019s boyfriend. Exciting!!!