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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Story of an Elevator

    Hi, I really liked this but I think you could have added more detail and description. Especially when your MC is in the lift and realizing just how claustrophobic she ...

    Jul 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Valen

    HI, I loved your poem. It was short and sweet but so powerful. I got a really good picture in my head of what you were trying to say. I ...

    Jul 20, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Mother and I

    This is probably the most unhelpful review you've ever got but all I can say is that is was BRILLIANT! Moonstar x

    Jul 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love...or Torcher?

    Hello I'm moonstar! I've just read your Love...or torcher poem. It was really really great! Seriously it was a real great read! Will definitely have to read more of your ...

    Jun 22, 2009


trust your heart if the seas catch fire (and live by love though the stars walk backward)
— E.E. Cummings