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  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: The Story of an Elevator

    Hi, I really liked this but I think you could have added more detail and description. Especially when your MC is in the lift and realizing just how claustrophobic she ...

    Jul 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Valen

    HI, I loved your poem. It was short and sweet but so powerful. I got a really good picture in my head of what you were trying to say. I ...

    Jul 20, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Mother and I

    This is probably the most unhelpful review you've ever got but all I can say is that is was BRILLIANT! Moonstar x

    Jul 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Love...or Torcher?

    Hello I'm moonstar! I've just read your Love...or torcher poem. It was really really great! Seriously it was a real great read! Will definitely have to read more of your ...

    Jun 22, 2009


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