moon_fleur13

Super, thank you! This was originally a bed-time story for my little brother and he liked the absurdity of a ship made of straw and a shark that blows instead ...

I politely listed listened? pornstar look her face i think you missed an "on" lol loved the awkwardness at the end!

i really enjoyed the first five parts but the 6th seemed too happy sitcom ending to fit the rest of the story. other than that i loved your writing style ...