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Re: The God Next Door
Firstly, your description immediately got me hooked before I even started reading the story. It's such an interesting concept and from what I've read in this chapter you're already pulling ...
Dec 30, 2024 -
Re: Don't Go (Part 1)
I absolutely love everything about this! Your writing style is really unique and it kept me so entertained throughout. You captured depth of the Bridge Keeper's (I don't really know ...
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Re: The Dragon Boy
This is a really interesting concept! When he shifts back to his human form, his friends tell him that he is a hybrid creature. They reveal that his father is ...
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Re: Princess Of A Painted Prison
This was really entertaining from start to finish! The way that you fleshed out each person's relationship with one another was great. Lux being the playful yet responsible older sibling, ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: The Eyes of an Alien, Chapter One
You perfectly captured the beauty and wonder of space with this story. I love that you opened with a poem, it immediately set the tone of the piece and showed ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: Paradox Flame (パラドックスの炎)
First off, this is such a great premise. I'm a sucker for wibbly-wobbly timey-wimey stuff so I was immediately hooked. ancient-looking books and strange, futuristic machines scattered around. This con
Sep 27, 2024 -
Re: Christopher Mortem-Through the relics lies a disturbed soul
This story was so perfectly suspenseful. From the very first line I was just pulled into this world and couldn't tear my eyes away. Your descriptions were so vivid and ...
Sep 19, 2024
