monolith

The lyrics feel warm to the ear, as if you would play an acoustic song. The writing is good but the phraces you use, as im sure someone mentioned before ...

it is good indeed, as said before, gramar and spelling could be checked, but besides that, great job. i liked it because it is fluent and show's the true nature ...

good poem, in my opinion it reflects the nature of two things, maybe a dramatic relationship between them. it sounds as if the speaker and his "sister" where two parts ...

the poem itself is ok, it's always valid to leave options open like the "to fend them off" line, this enables the reader to relate to the poem on an ...