molmolk

I love this! especially "putting my love in a box" i think you really painted a picture and the flow in your poem is great! for me it was very ...

The beginning is absolutly, i can't even put words to it. it's fantatic! "elizabeth spry doesn't cry, she smirks at the world" it's fanomenal! The way you wrote it made ...

I think this was really beautifully written. It's so sad, but I kind of like that fact that you didn't go with the cookie cutter happy ending. Also when you ...

I do think it was a little cliche, BUT you can add contrast by doing something unexpected. But the girl being cheated on, then going out in the rain and ...