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Re: The New Generation--Chapter 6: Weapons... Maybe Not a Good Idea
This is great, and an amazing idea to do the " New Generation". Can't wait to read more. The characters are very realistic and well developed.
Oct 5, 2015 -
Re: A Demigod Song
Yay! Demigods rule. I wish this was my summer vacation. :)
Oct 5, 2015 -
Re: Silenced
Thanks! Luca, is actually the 12 year old boy, and his dad is drunk. Did I make it seem like Luca was drunk? If so I gotta change that. Thanks ...
Oct 5, 2015 -
Re: Forbidden Love
Good work. The words flow together well.
Sep 10, 2015
