modmyth

Hi there AEChronicle. I'm overjoyed with your enjoyment you're finding in my story! That's very encouraging. I get what you're saying about breaking down the paragraphs a little. I got ...

Thank you for the honest critique, Magenta. If you don't mind, I'd love to offer a rebuttal on some of this, along with my general comments on yours. On the ...

Yeah, I kind of figured that out after thinking about it from a movie script p.o.v. Looking forward to part two!