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Re: Jerk
Ok, so I suggest that you put more sentences in each paragraph. I realize that this is a short story and I can understand your story just fine, it's just ...
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Figure Skating
I honestly liked it, although I have a few suggestions! 1. I've noticed that you're missing a few words here and there, and your writing gets kind of confusing when ...
Apr 22, 2011