mizz-iceberg

I want everyone to know that I hate this sentence, too. But I couldn't find anything better that could tie together the main idea of the story. I would love ...

Glad you liked it, Music Girl. Alright guys I made the changes. I think it's much better.

darky.demark and gyrfalcon I agree the 'of's are distracting. I was actually trying to give it an abstract feeling, but I see it didn't work, so I'l definitely change that. ...

Here by request! I'm super glad you PM-ed me, otherwise I would have missed out the bit that you added. I think it was a very good idea to add ...

Sarah> Thanks for pointing all this out, I'll definitely get to the editing now. I like harsh critiques; that way I can really improve! PerpetualBhridge> I'm glad you enjoyed this ...

That's the stuff! I like your enthusiasm about your writing! Let me know when you have made the changes andI'll review it again. :D

Thank you guys for your comments. I understand what you mean Olivia about it needing more description. I tried to make vague, but I guess I got carried away. I'll ...

If this poem is true, I just want to tell you, there are ways to be set free other than jumping off cliffs. This poem is based on true feelings, ...

Awee that's a very cute short story. Are you going to continue it? Is it part of a longer story? Well, it was a nice story. I didn't catch any ...

This is probably my favorite chapter so far!

I can't say much about this piece as it's very short. If you write more let me know and I'd love to critique.

Well it's rather short but I'm hooked! Can't wait to read more. Yes this piece was rough in a few places but nothing major. I found it rather poetical as ...

Hey!! Interesting poem. I don't necessarily agree with your views but the structure of the poem was good and the words used well. It made sense and you conveyed your ...

Wonderful poem!! Great descriptions and so much beauty in it yet it's so simple. No need to use long tricky words to convey feelings. It was very well done!! *Star ...

I've been waiting quite a while for some sort of review or comment regarding this post. I'd really appreciate it if someone could take the time to read through this ...