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Coral -> Thanks for the suggestions! I'll edit the story asap. Tommy and Shion -> You guys are so sweet! I'm glad you liked it. :)

Thanks for the review Elitehusky. I appreciate it. And I'm glad you liked the poem. =)

Thanks Fizza!

Thanks for the comment sealegs! I'm glad the poem captured your interest. :)

Cal, you are so incredibly awesome! These are amazing songs, and quite spot on! Thanks you so, so much! I am seriously gloating right now. xD

Here by request! This review is going to be done in parts. This post is for the first part of your story. I'm going to be as honest as possible, ...

A huge thanks to all three of you for reviewing this story. I do wish I had, had enough time to edit this, but I posted it for a contest ...

Rosey, you are absolutely awesome. I'm going edit this story by tonight, according to your suggestions. Thank you so, so , so much! Can't wait for the overall part!

I rather liked Turnabout. True, not her best work, but still not the worst book. I'm also a bit of a fan of The Giver. But everyone's entitled to their ...

You rock, Mars! I made all the changes you suggested. Thank you so much for looking through the story and being so helpful. ^_^ -Zehra

Tithe by Holly black. I absolutely hated that one. It made very little sense, and all the main character ever does is swear and smoke. there's no depth to any ...

Thanks Antigone! I made those changed. As for those sand dunes. I watched a movie once, where a group of people hid in the shadow of a large sweeping sand ...

Great stuff Angel! I've noticed your beginnings are week, but the endings are very strong. It is sometimes rather difficult to really get into the writing, and by mid length ...

Hello Angel! The beginning of the story was good, it caught my interest and I wanted to keep reading. In the beginning of the chapter I did not like your ...

Hello! I'm going to review your poem today, Lets get started on the nitpicks first. You make feel like I worth a while When I'm sad you make smile You’re ...