mizz-iceberg

Hey Persephoneia! I like this poem a lot. The speaker's candid attitude and honest acknowledgement through out the poem was enjoyable. The repetitive use of words like "yes" and "yeah" ...

Hello Flower-Child. You have some powerful images in this poem! I really liked: Saving you, was like fighting off hundreds of soldiers with a single feather. However, if you got ...

Hey Elinor! I'm Mizz Iceberg. Nice to meet you. This is an interesting story. I feel I have to read more of it to get a better idea of it, ...

Hey Jagged! I'm Mizz Iceberg. Nice to meet you. :) I like this poem. Your use of imagery and metaphors is beautiful. The amount of details and emotions in the ...

Hello! Here as promised. The story is a little messy right now. There are lots of grammar and punctuation errors littered about. The pace is too fast and we don't ...

Hey Face Engine! I think I reviewed another poem of yours just a while ago. I like this one better, though. I would like to contradict with the above reviewers. ...

Hi! I'm Mizz Iceberg. Nice to meet you. :) I can see where you're going with this poem, but I don't think it's working. The poem seems like a list. ...

Hey there! Excellent poem. It has a great message about casting aside expectations and norms and ideals of the world and being who you really want to be, rising above ...

Hey Kylan! This story is brilliant. While writing from the eyes of a murder or criminal is nothing new, you managed make it fresh and interesting. I liked the detachment, ...

Hey Dems! I adore this poem. Probably because I love your subject. Having recently read and fallen in love with Catcher in the Rye, I was taken in by this ...

Hey jemjive! At parts I thought the story was sweet, other times it just came off as very cliche and contrived, and there were bits I thought were quite clever. ...

Hi there! This is a very sad story. I love the concept. It's interesting that you kept it short. I'm not sure how I feel about that. On one hand, ...

Hey Gabriella! Initially when I read this poem I wasn't so sure I was going to like it. But as mybrokenreality pointed out, less is more. It's a very simple ...

Hey Josh! That's an interesting poem. And I like the topic too! Frustration is something a lot of us can relate to. However, I'm sure how you experienced it would ...

Hey papersolstice! I think this poem has a lot of potential. I do see where you're going with this. What this lacks is originality. "Why" is indeed a cliche and ...